Information
Goodreads: And Break the Pretty Kings
Series: None (yet?)
Age Category: Young Adult
Source: Netgalley
Publication Date: June 20, 2023
Official Summary
A crown princess. A monster the gods fear. A destiny no one can outrun.
Inspired by Korean history and myths, this rich and evocative high-stakes fantasy is perfect for fans of Gallant and Six Crimson Cranes.
Mirae was meant to save her queendom, but the ceremony before her coronation ends in terror and death, unlocking a strange new power within her and foretelling the return of a monster even the gods fear. Amid the chaos, Mirae’s beloved older brother is taken–threatening the peninsula’s already tenuous truce.
Desperate to save her brother and defeat this ancient enemy before the queendom is beset by war, Mirae sets out on a journey with an unlikely group of companions while her unpredictable magic gives her terrifying visions of a future she must stop at any cost.
Review
And Break the Pretty Kings has a lot of potential, with its headstrong protagonist, high-stakes plot, and complex world building. Unfortunately, there is simply so much going on in the book, from the characters’ backstories to the country’s history to the ever-changing plot and predictions and multitude of attempted plot twists that the main emotion I experienced while reading was confusion. I don’t know what to say, besides that a more heavy-handed developmental editor might have been able to draw out the gem of the story that’s clearly at the heart of this, but that didn’t happen.
Jeong gives a good attempt at world building, but the way the information is imparted isn’t always clear. There are times the protagonist alludes to things about history or politics or religion that are just hints of what’s going on, but it’s not until later in the novel that a full explanation is given, leaving readers to kind of guess and fill in the blanks in the meantime. And then there’s the fact that things keep changing. Some of this, I believe, is because the protagonist is supposed to be wrong about some things. So, for instance, she starts the novel talking about the apparently obvious gods-given destiny of her family to “unite the peninsula,” and it isn’t until later readers get a fuller picture that this might be wrong and maybe not even ordained by the gods. (But maybe it IS ordained by the gods. As I said, it’s not clear!)
The author also attempts to add some suspense and plot twists, but to me it just makes everything more crazy and confusing. One gets the idea there’s a love interest. But wait, maybe it’s another guy. Or possibly a third guy. And there there . . . isn’t actually a romance in the book at all. Just hints that the protagonist will have a love interest in her future. One of three guys, maybe. The same thing happens with the villain. One guy’s the villain, then he’s not? Or maybe he is? This stuff didn’t really “keep me on my toes” or keep me engaged; it just seemed wild because something I and the protagonist believed was true changed page by page. There wasn’t enough build-up between the changes.
Finally, I’m not sure about the magic. There’s a whole magic system developed, which seems fine overall. The weird part is that the protagonist is supposed to have legendary, unparalleled magic, the type of powers predicted by the gods to be the great salvation or the great downfall of a nation, something no one has seen before that everyone should fear! The reality is a letdown. the protagonist only uses the power a handful of times, and it’s not really a *magic* or an action, in some sense. There’s no way to predict what using her power will result it. It’s an interesting idea, but not really impressive in the way the author seems to have intended.
The book is fine. I think a lot of people will love it. I was largely confused and not really invested. The ending strongly implies there will be a sequel, though I haven’t seen any information about that yet. I, for one, will not be reading it.
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