Seeker by Arwen Elys Dayton (ARC Review)


Goodreads: Seeker
Series: Seeker #1
Source: Netgalley
Publication Date: February 10, 2015

Official Summary

Quin Kincaid has been put through years of brutal training for what she thinks is the noble purpose of becoming a revered ‘Seeker’.

Only when it’s too late does she discover she will be using her new-found knowledge and training to become an assassin. Quin’s new role will take her around the globe, from a remote estate in Scotland to a bustling, futuristic Hong Kong where the past she thought she had escaped will finally catch up with her.


I have mixed feelings about Seeker.  On one hand, the book is ambitious, well-written, and imaginative.  It is a young adult fantasy novel that has a rare amount of world-building and an unusual amount of diversity.  On the other hand, the novel gets so caught up in its own world-building, in its own show and its own message that “TONS OF THINGS ARE AT STAKE AND THERE ARE MORAL QUESTIONS,” that it never adequately deals with any of the moral questions it purports to be raising.  In a sense, this is a book that is well-constructed but is too often about nothing interesting at all.

The novel opens strongly.  There is action and a bit of mystery, as the three protagonists John, Quin, and Shinobu are engaged in a deadly training battle, right before they will go “THERE” and take their oaths to become Seekers.  Their training grounds in Scotland are strangely medieval, but readers eventually get hints that Seeker takes place in a futuristic world.  The first transition between these two distinct settings is admittedly clunky, but as the book progresses the two atmospheres blend, and it becomes apparent that Dayton put a lot of thought into constructing her world.

She also clearly put some thought into creating the magic.  Some things remain unclear and frustrating, however.  For instance, “THERE” is never referred to as anything else, which is ridiculous.  Yes, in public the Seekers might wish to be somewhat circumspect while talking about their magical abilities, but as they never refer to “THERE” as something more specific even among themselves, the impression the reader is left with is that the Seekers do not actually understand where or what “THERE” is at all, even though they ostensibly have hundreds of years of Seeker lore and history in which they could have theorized about this.  The contrast between this complex history, which Dayton seems to have richly imagined, and the Seekers’ refusal to acknowledge to utilize or acknowledge it, makes the Seekers as whole seem childish rather than stern and magical.

On an individual level, most of the characters are also annoying.  Dayton aims for complexity, but just about every character comes out markedly on the “disagreeable” or “selfish” side of the personality spectrum.  And while I don’t believe characters “have to” or “should” be “likable” in order for a book to be good, I’ll admit it makes it difficult for me as a reader to feel an investment in the supposed problems of characters I intensely dislike.

Which leads me to the main flaw of the book: The entire premise, the thing readers are supposed to care about, is that the Seekers have an evil secret that will absolutely destroy the protagonists and maybe the world once it is revealed.  This is absurdly overstated.  It turns out that the major moral “dilemma” that the majority of the characters lose sleep over is whether it is acceptable to murder innocent people for profit.  No.  No it is not.  This is not an interesting moral “puzzle” for characters to spend an entire book attempting to come to terms with.  Practically no reader is going to see this a gray issue!  Also, these characters are people who were literally raised on the concept that they would be the good-doers of the world (with the idea that “good-doers” SAVE people in fact), which makes it particularly unbelievable that any of them think this is a gray issue.

Thus, it turns out that the characters who are really interesting, who actually have complicated ethical problems to solve are not the protagonists at all; they are the minor characters.  I will admit to really loving Maud, and if the entire book had been about her instead, I would have found it more compelling.  In the first place, Maud was raised with a more nuanced understanding of morality.  In the second place, the questions she is facing are themselves more nuanced.  Finally, she has a more complicated standing in the world than John, Quin, and Shinobu, and she has to learn to define for herself what her role is, and when she should become involved with the events around her.

There are things that Seeker deserves a lot of credit for.  It is well-constructed, in terms of world-building, pacing, alternating character points-of-view, and so forth.  It envisions a unique futuristic world and a unique system of magic.  It attempts to draw complex characters.  However, since it falls so flat on moral complexity and it so soundly fails to deliver on its promised hard-hitting premise of the Seekers’ deadly secret, I find myself quite uninterested in reading any more of this tale.  This is the only book of the series I’ll read.


7 thoughts on “Seeker by Arwen Elys Dayton (ARC Review)

    • Briana says:

      I totally understand that sentiment. I just don’t DNF too many books, perhaps out of stubbornness. 😉 I wish SEEKER had just had a better “secret.” There’s literally nothing stopping Quin and Shinobu from not doing what they’re told beyond the very forced explanation that they cannot imagine disobeying her father. So they can have an intense moral dislike of murder but will do it just “because Briac said so.” Sorry, but I don’t feel sorry for them.


  1. stephaniesbookreviews says:

    Great review! I got this from NetGalley, too, and am about 100 pages in and just can’t get into. I hate DNF-ing any book, especially one I get specifically for a review, but I just don’t care about the characters at all and I’m so confused about what’s going on.


    • Briana says:

      I think I’m sometimes too optimistic for my own good. 😀 I perhaps should have seen, right after the “big secret” is revealed in the beginning, that the book wasn’t going anywhere I would find interesting. I mean, sure, finding out your ancestors were thugs for hire is probably disappointing and unsettling, but I don’t see how this is a huge moral issue that the book needs to center around. It doesn’t mean “everything has changed” or “the truth will end them all,” as the tagline states. It just means these people need to find new life goals. The only supposed obstacle to their moving on is really the father, and the incredibly forced explanation that they just “can’t imagine” not obeying his every order. I don’t buy it. Quin should have run away immediately instead of pretending just the concept of disobeying her father is too much for her.

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  2. jubilare says:

    finding I do not like or care about the main protagonists in a story is pretty much death to that story for me. It’s why I put down the Wheel of Time series. When one finds oneself wishing to transport a freight train into a world that doesn’t usually have them simply in order to run down the main protagonist, it’s a bad sign. When one also becomes indifferent to pretty much all of the rest of the cast, there had better be something else compelling about a book to keep me reading. 😛


    • Briana says:

      Exactly! I know publishers are particularly into “character driven” stories right now, but that puts a lot of pressure on the characters. If I don’t like the characters or feel no investment in their problems, how can enjoy the book if the characters are supposed to be one of the main draws?

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      • jubilare says:

        I suppose different tastes may have something to do with it. I’ve talked to people who love and identify with characters I don’t… even characters that I consider very poorly written. Imagination is a powerful thing.


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